After Friday's spectacular failure I had another go, this time only with Noam as audience. This time, just like before, was full of uncomfortable stops, riddled with um's and em's. She sent me to my room to prepare my notes and rehearse , and after a few dry runs I was back for another go. This time the the feedback was that I was too robotic and should be more casual. So... yeah, all I need to do is take my carefully planned script and write some casual-ty in. Easy.